I · Clarity
Message Review
Find out if your website says what you do.
We read your home page and your main offer page the way a first-time visitor would. You get a written review of what is clear, what is not, and three new headline options for each page.
- Price
- $200
- Delivery
- 3 business days
- You receive
- Written review and new headline options
Fixed price in US dollars. Scope, price and date are confirmed by email before work starts.
Scope
What is included.
6 items, all in the price.
- A close reading of your home page and one offer page
- What a new visitor understands in the first ten seconds
- Gaps between what you sell and what the page says
- Three headline and subheadline options per page
- A short written review you can share with your team
- Questions by email for seven days after delivery
Not included
Rewriting full pages and design changes. To set how your company talks everywhere, see the Brand Messaging Guide.
Timeline
How it runs.
Counted from the day we have your brief and your access.
- IDay 1
You send the link
Your website and two sentences on who your customers are.
- IIDay 2
We read and write
We review both pages and draft the headline options.
- IIIDay 3
Review delivered
You receive the written review by email.
Before we start
What we need from you.
Send these with your brief so the clock can start.
- Your website address
- Who you sell to, in a sentence or two
- The offer you most want people to understand
How to order
Email us the service name and your website. We confirm scope, price and delivery date in writing before any work starts.
Questions
About this service.
Short answers before you order.
Is this useful if my site is new?
Yes. A new site is the best moment to check that the message lands before you send traffic to it.
Can you review more than two pages?
Yes, each extra page is quoted in writing before we start.
Do you change the website yourselves?
No. You receive the review and the headlines and decide what to change.
Tell us what people should understand.
Send the service you want and your website. We reply by email.
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